The Screenshots Thread!

So this is a topic on many forums, so I'm looking forward on here. The purpose of this topic is simple. Post here to receive critique for your screenshots and even a chance to promote your own project. This is a thread to post images of maps and screenshots which you want to get criticized by other members.

Rules you need to know:
1) Don't post an image after another without criticising the image(s) of the previous poster. Everyone wants feedback, just like you mang .
2) Any game maker screenshots are aloud(RMXP, RM2k3, ect)
3) Videos to showcase mapping or gameplay is also allowed on here,
4) Re-posting your screenshot is allowed if you didn't get any constructive criticism. Only if you wish
5) Have fun posting your screenshot's

I'll start off. Here's a screenshot on my game called Oblivion Remnant. YEAAH!!!

You know I love that stuffs, Mango Wait... Do I see a visible enemy or is my eye just going bonkers?

@Luiishu535:
Lol well thank you! And yes there won't be any random encounters anymore, you'll have to touch the enemies for battles now( Like final fantasy 13)

Totally awesome, Zachfoss. You certainly are a whiz at mapping.

Here's Clethon Village, one of the third-ish towns in my NEW game, Portal to Darkania.

Some screenshots of my current projects Title and Menus. Both are WIPs.

Spoiler:

And yes, I am playing too much Disgaea currently.

@Zachfoss: Nice to hear! I've heard that lots of people are getting more and more annoyed about random enemy encounters nowadays.

@Verm: That's a great layout Verm! Your mapping has increased alot since you started. What I recommend is that you put some more details to the map like flowers, trees and even some animals. A nice tint and a descent fog can do wonders to a map aswell

@Leonheart: Those screens looks great! Are you using original art for your project?

@luiishu535: Nah, it's art from Disgaea. The closest to original art I have is icons and character sprites. And a few tiles.

Ah okay. It looks nice though! Didn't know you where a spriter/artist, leon

I suppose those screenies look nice. Here's mine:


I parallaxed the beginning of the game

@Zachfoss: That looks great dude! I'm always impressed by parallaxed mapping.

@Verm: It has a good layout for a small town, but I do agree with luiishu. If it had some more details like more flowers, and maybe some more ponds with a bridge or something, just to fill up that empty space, it would look great!

@Leonheart: Looks interesting. That art style is one I've never seen before...

@VVBlastFuryVV: I like the fog, but it could be a bit sharper and clearer, in order to fully see what is going on. It has a good feel to it though!

Here is some screens from my project:

This is an underwater dungeon. Pretty plain but what do you think about the air bubble sprite?


And this one!

Title screen for legend of Bakeru still a WIP...It was annoying to get the text that way XD

Well I got at leat 2 screenshots, I made in my free time back then, only one is officially for my project, Project Saige, hope you guys like them, I'll post more info and stuff for Project Saige later on as time goes by! Everything is a WIP sadly, until I get some helpers, and a team together.


Characters are...(From the left)

Natsumi Hinomoto
Reina Mikamura
Shinsuke Mikamura
Saige Murayami
Jin Kunasagi
Kurai Kunasagi
Sasuke Miyamoto

This pic is from a alternate intro I was going to make for my RPG Project, code named "Project Saige" but I canned the idea cause it wasn't working so well when I tried testing it. The beginning for it goes like this...

Saige and the others are looking at the final stage from a distance, Saige knowing it's the calm before the storm tells the others that he needs a few minutes to reflect on things...

"My name is Saige Murayami, here my words, we don't have much time left, listen to my story, it is here that it all began for me, and it is here where it will all end."

"To avenge my father who was slayed by "him" and to end this conflict once and for all."

Then Saige goes into how things have come to this moment, it takes place 2 years earlier, Saige leads an attack on the castle/base to attack the main villain with some help from an old army buddy of his father's, the attack to get into the base is successful, but when he confronts the main villain time freezes, a voice tells him it is not time to fight him just yet, and he is pulled away from the battle in a strange warp hole before he even lands the first blow.

Not too bad huh? I can get some good ideas when I put my mind to it, I thank my sister Cassundra actually, cause I used to watch her try out RPG Maker on PSOne back then.

Thanks sis!



Here's a screenshot for my Story/RPG Maker Project, "Project Saige" This is the Inner Conference Hall of Obuno's Castle, it is here that Obuno, Aion and Lord Gabriele plan their strategy's and plans against Saige and his friends, as well as their grand scheme.(Which is yet to be revealed by me.)

In this pic are Emperor Obuno and his followers.

Aion Alexander - Emperor Obuno’s Subordinate

Lord Gabriele Lysander - High Priest and faithful friend to Aion

Maximillion Maximus - Self Proclaimed War God & Millionaire

Emperor Obuno Katsuhito - Emperor of Palmacosta, and archenemy of Hayate Murayami

Shadow Master - A powerful sorcerer who wields the power of darkness (A demon in disguise) able to manipulate people who have dark hearts or emotions

Arlong Davis - The Silver Giant, considered the strongest of the group

On the Left...

Melina “Millennia” Mellusion - Powerful demon/dark sorceress, who can control snakes and black magic, loves to manipulate people

Alicia Laney White - A sky-pirate who wields a snake-like sword, ruthless and cold-hearted, she usually backstabs her allies and punishes her crew whenever they’ve failed or are no longer usable

Michael Zigfried - A master swordsman whom once fought against Hayate Murayami

Dr. Andrew Hunter - A brilliant Scientist with a high IQ of 300, crazed and only interested in the end results of his experiments.

In the Corner on the left is...

Red Swordsman aka Sain Minnock Ishikawa - No info available

Shadow Ninja - A warrior of darkness under the Shadow Master’s mind control, once a member of a proud clan of Ninjas

On the Right...

Richard Ray: A sword fighter with a split personality whom causes more problems than you can count, psychotic and deadly, he should not be taken lightly, right-hand man of Arlong

Nightshade - A deadly assassin/swordsman with incredible speed, who also uses a deadly poison in battle

Dr. Ameena S. Anderson - A neko-human whom must serve Aion and Emperor Obuno for her daughter’s life, she loathes the fact that Aion and Obuno have her daughter captive somewhere, she has no choice but to serve them or her daughter’s fate is sealed, with a high IQ and a vast knowledge of machines she’s a smart yet sexy lady, but sometimes she can be a bit wild considering her half cat DNA.

Linda Z. - A faithful follower of Mellusion, a cold-hearted woman whom uses dark magic, and is also a powerful sword wielder.

And the maids are just servants of Aion's.

Hope you like!

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Spoiler:

Anyways here's a Screenshot on my game. The map is still on progress.

Screenie:


Video:

@Kelarly
I like the air bubble idea, kinda neat. But what attracts my attention is the second screenshot, the thing in the middle, looks quite interesting! Oh and the mapping is fantastic!

@Zachfoss
I like the tileset, makes the game have a darker vibe to it, but is there going to be any brighter maps in your game? Or is it gonna be just dark maps.
The mapping in the video is also very nice, I especially like the swimming!

@VVBlastFuryVV
Wow, what a nice screenshot, I like it ALOT it looks very nice! It's just set out so nicely, and the mapping looks splendid! Oh and I like the text on the lower left corner!

Zachfoss wrote:

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Spoiler:

Anyways here's a Screenshot on my game. The map is still on progress.

Screenie:


Video:

Thanks man, that means alot! I'll add em to the spoilers section when I get a chance, I'll also show my project videos too.

kelarly wrote:

@Zachfoss: That looks great dude! I'm always impressed by parallaxed mapping.

@Verm: It has a good layout for a small town, but I do agree with luiishu. If it had some more details like more flowers, and maybe some more ponds with a bridge or something, just to fill up that empty space, it would look great!

@Leonheart: Looks interesting. That art style is one I've never seen before...

@VVBlastFuryVV: I like the fog, but it could be a bit sharper and clearer, in order to fully see what is going on. It has a good feel to it though!

Actually, it's supposed to be like that so you don't really know what's going on, it's mysteryyyyyy. xD.

Here's a screenshot from my project.

Zachfoss wrote:

I'll start off. Here's a screenshot on my game called Oblivion Remnant. YEAAH!!!

Nicely done, Zach!

Oblivion3O wrote:

Here's a screenshot from my project.

Whoa! That looks awesome, Stugg!

@VVBlastFuryVV: Well thank you Stugg!

A screenshot of the first "temple" in my game.

Leonheart wrote:

A screenshot of the first "temple" in my game.

This looks awesome!

@Everyone: It's looking great, all of you But please, don't quote images or full messages. If you want to quote, quote a line, not a whole message and don't quote images.

Here are some screens from me:


Rebecka being herself xD

A boulder puzzle!